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  The Perplexing Pointlessness of Oshimu Shuuzou's "Lily"

  Let's be brutally honest: Oshimu Shuuzou's one-shot manga Lily feels less like a crafted narrative and more like a conceptual placeholder accidentally published. While the one-shot format inherently demands brevity and often thrives on implication or a potent single idea, Lily astonishingly manages to convey... absolutely nothing. It’s a void dressed in panels, leaving the reader blinking in confusion, wondering what, if anything, the creator or publisher intended to achieve beyond simply occupying physical (or digital) space.

  The synopsis itself reads like a rough draft note: A nameless, faceless (in terms of personality) boy frequents a convenience store. He recognizes a woman there as a pornographic actress, fixating specifically on her eyes. That's the entirety of his characterization – an ocular fetishist with no discernible inner life. One day, with the subtlety of a sledgehammer, he corners her. He delivers his awkward, intrusive monologue about admiring her eyes and her work, then makes the baffling, deeply uncomfortable request to record a video of her reaction to his confession. Her response? A punch. She vanishes. His reaction? Satisfaction. Roll credits. はい、終わり。

  This isn't minimalism; it's narrative bankruptcy. There's no setup to establish why her eyes are so compelling beyond his bald assertion. There's no exploration of her perspective – she’s merely a prop, an object first on screen, then in the store, and finally as the deliverer of a punchline (literally). The confrontation lacks any tension, nuance, or believable human interaction. It’s a sequence of events strung together with the flimsiest of threads, devoid of cause, effect, or consequence. The boy’s satisfaction at the end is perhaps the most perplexing element. Is it masochism? The thrill of transgression? A twisted sense of closure? The manga offers zero insight, rendering his reaction arbitrary and meaningless. It feels less like a character beat and more like a random endpoint chosen because something had to happen.

  Where Lily truly collapses is in its utter lack of thematic resonance or character exploration. What was the intended takeaway?

  The Emptiness of Obsession? Possibly, but the boy's obsession is presented so superficially it fails to resonate as a critique or exploration.

  The Exploitative Nature of the Adult Industry/Voyeurism? The confrontation is creepy and objectifying, but the manga doesn't delve into this; it merely depicts it flatly and moves on. The punch feels like a weak narrative cop-out rather than a meaningful commentary.

  The Search for Authentic Connection? A generous interpretation, but the boy's actions are purely performative and invasive, negating any potential for this reading. Her disappearance underscores disconnection, not revelation.

  The Banal Absurdity of Modern Life? Even if this was the aim, the execution is so limp and devoid of irony or depth that it falls utterly flat.

  Without any discernible theme, character arc (both protagonists end exactly where they started, just with a sore face for him), or emotional core, the entire exercise feels sterile and pointless. It doesn’t provoke thought; it provokes bewilderment. It doesn’t evoke feeling; it evokes a shrug.

  Compounding the narrative emptiness is the uninspired artwork. It’s functional at best, merely moving characters from point A to point B without any distinctive style, evocative framing, or emotional weight. The eyes – supposedly the central fixation – aren’t rendered with any particular depth or uniqueness that would visually justify the boy's intense focus. Backgrounds are perfunctory, character designs are generic, and the pivotal punch lacks dynamism or impact. In a medium where visuals can carry immense storytelling weight, especially in a short format, Lily's art does nothing to elevate or compensate for the non-existent plot. It simply exists, much like the story itself.

  The Lingering Question: Why?
  This is the crux of the frustration. What was the point? Was it a rejected idea fleshed out just enough to fill pages? An experiment in anti-narrative that fails to land any conceptual punch? Or, as you rightly suspect, was it simply published for publishing's sake – content to fill a magazine slot with no higher ambition? The sheer lack of anything to grasp onto – no memorable moment, no intriguing character quirk, no striking visual, no provocative idea – makes Lily feel like a profound waste of the reader's time. It doesn't challenge, entertain, disturb, or amuse; it simply is, and then it ends.

  Lily is less a story and more a narrative null set. It embodies the criticism that "nothing happens" in its purest, most frustrating form. Oshimu Shuuzou offers no lens through which to interpret these hollow events, no depth to the shallow characters, and no visual flair to distract from the void. The result is a one-shot that feels astonishingly insubstantial, leaving behind only the faint echo of a baffled "Huh?" and the distinct impression that its creation served no purpose beyond occupying space between two covers. A truly forgettable, and regrettably pointless, reading experience.

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